poetry on the run
i don't like the whole marvin k. mooney thing. nor did i enjoy that story. i feel like it's a more violenced version of language poetry, which, to me, seems like a weird sort of "already been done." like young people trying to steal from old people, but in a very uninteresting way.admittedly, there are a few interesting images. but the language, the music of the language, is so haphazard and clumsy that it's very hard for me to read.i hope that's not that point.
Yeah it's been done before, but I did enjoy stumbling through the words. You're right they don't flow very well at all, but I wanted to keep reading for some reason.I liked finding sentences like Mother nowhere to be seen, and So confusing is truth, and Mouth wipe sleeve stained purple from the grape juice, among all the jumble.I haven't read much language poetry but I did enjoy this.
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